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End of Term Review May 20, 2010

Filed under: Uncategorized — jgarcia41 @ 10:19 pm

Looking back through my writing in the saved drafts of my laptop I see that i have improved from one essay to the next as well as my final project. The first essay I wrote during this semester was about buget cuts in the school systems from personal experience I had seen the trouble that came along with budget cuts. My research was not as extensive as it should of been and I also did not use as much citations. I felt that I had done my paper in a rush because of procastination and that is why my paper suffered more errors. Our second essay was about  the health care reform. At first i didnt know very much about the subject just that it was being very strongly debated over in the whole nation, and President Obama kept tryint to get it to be passed before congress went on break.  On this essay I felt like I uncovered more material that I didnt know of before and I had more time to edit my rough draft and fix errors. I feel that after this class I have improved my writing style and what I do to prepare for writing longer essays that usually require doing more research. This class I believed will help me in my future for classes that will require a heavier amount of writing. Working in groups has also taught me more skills such as working with others and being held reliable for information. I found that I can work with both groups and myself  and do a good job with it. I have appreciated this class even if at first I was intimidated from all the writing it would require.

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